Hi Hannah! I read over your speech and I must say it's really good! I like your great use of vocabulary, since it's appropriate for an older teenage audience. I agree with you when you say that teenagers don't eat breakfast like they used to, because its true! I admit, I'm guilty of that too! Teenagers who do eat breakfast usually have small or unnutritious breakfasts. I think it's a great topic to cover, since you'll be presenting to a class of teenagers, and your speech will be on a topic that concerns them and their health. Great job!
Hanna, your link doesn't work! I had the same problem so I copied and pasted my draft.
ReplyDeleteIt should work now, I just forgot to share the file as a public document!
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah! I read over your speech and I must say it's really good! I like your great use of vocabulary, since it's appropriate for an older teenage audience. I agree with you when you say that teenagers don't eat breakfast like they used to, because its true! I admit, I'm guilty of that too! Teenagers who do eat breakfast usually have small or unnutritious breakfasts. I think it's a great topic to cover, since you'll be presenting to a class of teenagers, and your speech will be on a topic that concerns them and their health. Great job!
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