I agree that digital life has changed who we are but it isn't necessarily in a bad way. For example that fact that we have GPS can be a good thing so we don't get lost while driving. The fact that our life revolves around the digital world is out of our control and we can't really change it. You can choose on your own not to let it effect you but you will be on your own while the digital life improves and you will be left behind not knowing all the new technology.
I agree with what u are saying about how digital life is having a positive impact on us and that it Is moving forward so we should move with it. You should try to elaborate on how it is moving forward to improve your writing. I also like the GPS example that you gave! Good job Jessica! You go girl!
ReplyDeleteI agree with your point of view, that technology has both a good and bad side. On the contrary, it would be better if you elaborated a bit on your ideas, giving some more examples and evidence. Other than that, good job Jessica!
ReplyDeleteYour points are quite interesting about how things like GPS can help us, I feel like you could have given more examples like maybe about how medical technology can help us, or how things like Twitter and Facebook have taken over a bit, but overall you got to the point in a simple, easy, and understandable way.
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