Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Revised "Loyalty"


Chelsey Schmitt                                                 English Essay                                                      April 10, 2013

                                                                                 LOYALTY

 

                Loyalty. It can be the reason you know someone will be there for you in time of need or it can be the reason you have to sacrifice something you want for someone else. There are both positive and negative consequences for being too loyal. Too much of anything can be harmful, including loyalty. Loyalty is one of the most important attributes in life. Without loyalty, people would have no trust or confidence in each other. With this being said, you want to be careful with yours and others loyalty because you don’t want it to be taken for granted but at the same time it is what makes the world go around. Loyalty is something we depend on from our peers and other people in our life, but can it have a negative impact on us as well? In this essay, I will be discussing why there can be positive and negative consequences of being loyal.

The most positive outcome of being a loyal person is that you have a reputation as being a trustworthy, well rounded person. Loyalty is one of the best personality traits that one can have.  Others will trust and respect you and know that they can always count on you. This will most likely make you feel good about the person you are and that you are helping out others. Your friends will have a great amount of trust in you, knowing that they can always count on you and you will always be there for them. Also, if you are loyal to others, then they will most likely be loyal back to you and help you out if you are ever in a time of need. Without this loyalty, no one would be able to trust anyone and people’s relationships would be torn apart. What kind of world would it be if we couldn’t look to others in a time of need.

The main negative outcome of being too loyal is that people can easily take advantage of you because they might look at you as a weak individual. If someone knows you are a loyal person, they might try to take advantage of your loyalty by always asking you to do things for them knowing you will probably say yes. When you are always being loyal to others you will probably, at times, have to put your wants aside. If you are always doing things for others, you might not consider doing what’s best for you or what is important to you. You should only be loyal to people who deserve your loyalty and will give you theirs back. If being loyal is having a negative impact on you, then you might have to re-assess your standards and relationships.

Being loyal is an amazing trait to have that many will appreciate and it shows that you have good morals. You will also enjoy many benefits from being a loyal person. Unfortunately, there are some downsides to being too loyal that can make life very inconvenient for you. You should always make sure your loyalty is handled carefully and do not let anyone take it for granted. Hopefully you can do your best to make the positives of being loyal outweigh the negatives!

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