“To win at any
cost makes for hollow victories.” This was a quote I had once read from an
article, and I find it to be very true. Lying, backstabbing, and cheating to
get what you want is not, under any circumstances, the answer. Some of the
greatest tragedies in the history of the world stemmed from the thoughts of a
ruthless leader plotting his victory at the expense of other people’s lives. Other
issues, like steroids being used in sports is pretty much the same thing, on a
smaller scale. It is never necessary
to do the things you know are wrong in order to achieve a goal, no matter how
“important” it is to you. You simply cannot justify consciously making a choice
that you know will have a negative effect on the people around you, just to get
your way.
Admittedly, I personally have not really had any
experience with this topic. However, I know that the “winning-at-any-cost”
attitude is a common mindset amongst many teens today. An example: athletes.
Casually brushed off by adults as “over competitive”, or “occasionally
aggressive”, they tend to fly under the radar as nothing more than a promising
sports player. However, some of these seemingly perfect athletes are prepared
to do literally anything in order to get a trophy, medal or even to win a silly
ribbon. Whether they turn to drugs, steroids, or simply playing dirty, their
underlying intentions are clear: they are willing to do whatever it takes to
win, no matter who gets hurt or in trouble in the process. And that is not
okay! Even though this isn’t the most serious example, it is definitely real
and relatable. And if these corrupted athletes have grown up thinking that what
they are doing is okay, who knows what it may lead to when they grow older and
get a job! What else might they be able to excuse then?
Now, you might be thinking – what’s wrong with having a
goal? There is nothing wrong with having a goal, it is just the way that some
people set about to achieve the goal that is the problem. Think about it this
way: even Adolf Hitler had a goal. He wanted to “create” a wholly German nation
where everyone was blond-haired and blue-eyed. He wanted to “purify” the Aryan
race, through the elimination of “sub-humans” including Jews, Asians, black
Africans, etc. This dream, this sick, sadistic dream, eventually led to the
death of over 11 million people in the Holocaust. And yet, as callous a human
as Hitler may have been... he was still a human. And despite everything, he
probably did have a conscience. Which
is why it is even more appalling that he did what he did, just to create that
atrocious idea of perfection!
Both these scenarios– one on a larger scale and one on
a smaller scale – are examples of why it is NEVER necessary to do the things
you know are wrong in order to achieve an “important” goal. Although,
hopefully, none of us can relate to causing the widespread death of 11 million
people, I am sure we all know of a peer or a friend who has that “win-at-all-cost”
mindset. And even though they may have temporary success with that attitude, it
is bound to be their greatest downfall in the future. Justifying minor cases
like playing dirty in soccer in order to win a game at our age may lead to more
serious issues when they get older. So please, if you find that you are the
kind of person who is willing to trample anyone to get to the top, think again,
reconsider your actions, and do what you know is right. It will definitely
benefit you more in the long run!
Exceptional essay, Hanna! I really enjoyed the overall jist of the essay; your facts were clearly presented. As well, it was a good idea to put one relatable, minor example in addition to an extreme case, so we could understand your points. Furthermore, your thesis was clear and concise, and you followed through with it throughout the essay. The only constructive criticism I have to say is that you maybe could have added one more example, for instance, people cheating on tests and assignments just to get straight A's, because I find that this is a recurring issue in today's education may it be high school, university, or even elementary school! Other than that, your essay was very interesting to read and I totally agree with what you are saying.
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