No Red Pill No Blue Pill was a great composition that had very well wording. She had some extreamly great points that really made me think about myself as a learner. My favorite thing that she said was "No matter how a teacher tries, if a learner is not motivated to learn, there will be little progress." This is my favorite point because i feel it is very true and i can relate to it strongly. When i have no motivation to learn i dont seem to benefit from it nearly as much because i have no care for it. Motivation is a very important factor to a learners lerning outcome. This writer also had any great metaphors and examples that were quite inspriational for the reader. The "8 to be great" diagram was an extreamly good layout for a learner to take in and follow for great success. I really enjoyed reading this post and felt that i benefited alot from it.
The one thing that i felt was the biggest downfall to this post was that i do not feel that some of the pictures fit in with the literature. For example, the picture of the ballerina in point shoes was very pretty but i dont feel that it made a connection with the content. If the pictures were more conected to the words then i think it would be a near perfect piece of writing. Taking it all in, No Red Pill No Blue Pill was a great composition that expressed a great idea with many great supporting points.
Chelsey-pretty good start. You gave specific examples for your points. Remember to introduce with context for your readers. See if you can extend the response even more. To do this put it in draft form and republish when you are finished.
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