The author's style of writing enhanced this article, and made it more interesting to read. She had a somewhat poetic scheme while introducing her topic as well as rounding off at the end. Furthermore, I enjoyed the descriptive language scattered throughout the article. In addition, I noticed quite a lot of visuals throughout her work. Despite her writing style, the visuals were somewhat distracting, and only a few were necessary. For example, what connection did the very first picture have to the article? On the other hand, the allusions made within the text was very useful. To elaborate, to be honest I myself had no idea what "No red pill, no blue pill" meant, until I read through the whole piece. If it wasn't for the links, I would probably still not understand the connection it had to her article.
This article was very expressive and I enjoyed reading it very much. It made me realize that we couldn't put the blame on teachers all the time; students have as much authority of their learning as teachers do. Many people tend to blame teachers when they don't learn in school. However, has anyone considered the other side of the story- have the students been putting as much, if not more effort than the teachers? By highschool, the students are old enough to step up and be the change they want to see, instead of sitting on the sidelines and criticizing others. If they are not satisfied with the teacher's method of teaching, they should be the ones to take charge and let them know. Students should take the initiative to further their learning, because you only learn as much as you want to. In my opinion, blaming teachers is just the easy way out. This relates to our society and my personal experiences because I always hear negativity about teachers, when students are partly to blame. You cannot solely accuse teachers of not doing their job without considering if the students have either. After highschool, there will be no teachers to guide us, and we take on full responsibility of our learning. Therefore, we should be prepared to be self-motivated and ready to learn. I completely agree with the author's message, and she has done a good job of expressing her opinions effectively.
I agree with your opinion on No red pill no blue pill. I thought it was a bit hard to grasp on what she was saying at first because of her creative writing style,but when I reread it, her message became a lot more clearer.
ReplyDeleteYour response had a very strong sense of what you wanted to say. I can't find any major errors in your response except a couple spelling errors.
I wholly agree on "Blaming teachers is the easy way out", I believe that as a student blaming teachers helps us relieve our stress instead of taking it on.